Monday, September 29, 2008

About Me

25 June 2008

Dear Readers,

This blog really make my nose bleed. I'm not an expert in writing but I take "writing" as a challenge. I hope posting my write-ups will improve my skills in writing by having you, readers as my cyberspace mentors.

Business letters and features are the main idea of this blog. It will help first timer or even professionals on how to make a write and technical way of writing business letters like resignation letter, resume, excuse letter,etc...Flintstone Florita is the root of this blog. I'm 18-years old from the Queen City of the South,"CEBU". I'm an Information Technology (I.T.) student of Center for Industrial, Technology, and Enterprise (CITE). I'm an avid fan of Angel Locsin. She inspires me a lot in doing the best I can in things that I will do. I have the habit of writing and hate reading. My hobbies are strumming the guitar, browsing three hours in the internet, watching hollywood movies, reading history books and journals about UFO's, and eating as much as I can.

Many thanks for reading this letter. I hope you will read the letters that I will post on my blog and it encouraged you to love writing.

7C'c in Letter Writing

I.Clarity

A. If the writing is unclear, the result is
1.Mistakes
2.Irritation
3.Confusion
4.Wasted Time
5.Wasted Money(employee time and materials)


B.Writing with clarity requires

1.Precise word choices(right word for the situation)
2.Avoidance most Euphemism(Have a little fun)
3.Avoidance of slang
a. And what will happened when another employee was told to take the only copy of an important document and "burn a copy"
4.use of modifiers(Many of the examples have misplaced/danglingmodifiers; all have problems with clear communication)


II.Conciseness

A. Writing with the most meaning for the fewest words.
B. Writing concisely means
1.Avoiding long"low information content" words and phrases (example: inthe event that versus if)
2.Avoiding redundancy (example:8 a.m. in the morning)


III. Completeness

A. Answer all questions asked by the person requesting the correspondence
1.If you can't answer a question, say so
2.Answer in the same order as you were asked.
B.Give extra if appropriate
1.If a costumer asks about an upcoming sale, tell about other specialoffers that are similar.
2.If someone attending a seminar asks when it will take place, includinginformation on how to get there as well.


IV.Courtesy

A.Apply the golder rule
B.Consider "The rule of 250"
1.Most everyone knows at least 250 people over a lifetime.
2.They will not necessarily tell that 250 people if you have been kindand courteous, but they will tell them if you haven't
3.Your company's image is based on what and how you speak and write the message, wait till the next day (or at least after lunch)before sending it-then rewrite it.


V.Consideration

A.Write with "You attitude" rather than "Me attitude"
1.More uses of "you" than "me" or "we"
2.Positioning of pronouns, avoid beginning sentence with I.

B.More than just word substitutions
1.Interest/concern in reader.
2.A positive approach to wording.


VI.Concreteness

A.Be specific
1.Specific numbers rather than many, few, low, high
2.Specific dates rather than later, next month,ASAP*
3.Avoid words like good, well, poor, bad when the subject is measurable

B.Active voice rather than passive


VII.Correctness

A.Level of language appropriate for the education, background, age, etc.ofaudience
B.Spelling and Grammar
C.Facts

Solicitation Letter

Date: 27 September, 2008


Labogon, Mandaue City


Dear Friends and Family: Dr. Jun Langahin and Mr. Wildonis Go


I am writing to tell you about one important challenge I am taking on in 2007. I am volunteering to become a sponsor. As an alumni of Macrohon Institute, I am committed to raising 10,000.00 pesos to build a new highschool.


I’d like you to know why the fundraising is important to me. The challenge of being a volunteer is something I never thought I’d take on. But with training, discipline and the limitless support of my family, classmates, and from our Alumni President , Fr. Carlo Joven Caracut, I see the goal is within reach. Giving this letter to you feels really great and I am amazed how one can discover a passion for charity by chance. I am truly blessed with good health and great support toward achieving this goal.


Macrohon Institute is a very special school to me. This is my Highschool. This is my school that I have met all my good friends and this is also my school that I ‘ve learned to respect. This is my school where everyone gathers around MACI Beach to study. For nearly seven years after our school was leveled to ashes, I have realized that it would never be the same again.


Thank you for considering helping me with yet another “do good” proposition. Regardless of whether or not you can support me on this particular program, I appreciate the ability to share what I’m involved in and why I think it’s important.


For more Information: Visit our website : www.macialumni.com
Email : MaciAlumni@yahoo.comThis e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it


MANY THANKS,


FLINTSTONE FLORITA
Alumni Volunteer
Address: Labogon, Mandaue City
Tel Number: 238-8083

Resignation Letter

Sitio Upper Kalubihan
Labogon, Mandaue City
15 July 2008

Mr. Juan Santos
Director of Purchasing
Kauswagan Appliances
Cebu City

Mr. Santos

My three years at Kauswagan Appliances has been an invaluable period of learning and professional development. I arrive as a novice and I believe that today I'm a professional already because of the personal attention and tutoring I have received from my supervisors and the example set both by my supervisors and peers.

However, i believe the time has come for me to move to a larger company that can give me an opportunity to continue my professional development. Thus, I have accepted with a General Electric position, where I am scheduled to begin on August 20. Therefore, my last day at Kauswagan will be on August 18. However, if you need more time to hire and train my replacement, I can make arrangements to work longer

Many thanks for the experiences I have gained and best wishes for the future.

Very truly yours,


FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA

Resume

FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA
Labogon, Mandaue City 6014
Phone Number : 238-8083

EMPLOYMENT OBJECTIVE

I.T. Support technician where I can fully use my skills in repairing and troubleshoot computers.

EDUCATION

Center for Industrial Technology and Enterprise
(San Jose,Cebu City)
Diploma in Information Technology (May 2007)
Director's List: 1.3 grade point of average of possible 1.0

Mandaue City Comprehensive National High School (Centro, Mandaue City)
Graduated as a Character Awardee

EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE

Lexmark Research and Development Corporation
(IT Park, Cebu City)
Trainee, Testing Department (November 2005-May 2007)
  • Tested printer drives on a project basis
  • Logged reports for documentation
  • Awarded Most Improved Trainee
  • Attended seminar on testing held on July 2006
SPECIAL SKILLS AND ABILITIES

Officer, Incite Club (Blink Publication), CITE
  • Attended Training Seminars for Journalism and Technical Writing
  • Organized programs for Summer Technician Program in CITE
  • Make write-ups and take photographs
Representative, CITE Organization
  • Drafted policies, rights, programs and laws for children
  • Conduct consultations and review of United Nation Children's Rights
  • Attended Leadership Seminar for Children 's Rights
Computer Literate
  • Can do programmable works in PHP, Java, and C++
  • Working knowledge in MS Word, MS Excel, MS Publisher, and MS Powerpoint
  • Specialized skills in Adobe Photoshop and Macromedia Flash
REFERENCE

Engr. Ruben Laraya
Executive Director
Center for Industrial Technology and Enterprise
San Jose, Cebu City
Tel. no. 346-1611

Dr. Jun Langahin
Students Affairs Officer
Center for Industrial Technology and Enterprise
San Jose, Cebu City
Tel. no. 346-1611

Mr. Marlon Valencia
Industry Coordinating Officer
Center for Industrial Technology and Enterprise
San Jose, Cebu City
Tel. no. 346-1611

Application Letter

Sitio Kalubihan, Labogon
Mandaue City, Cebu
17 July 2008

Mr. Juan dela Cruz
HRD Manager
Neverfail
San Jose, Cebu City

Mr. dela Cruz:

A certain employee of yours, Juan Santos, has informed meof a job openong for an I.T. Support Technician in your company. I am interested to apply for the said position.

I'm a third year student of the Center for Industrial Technology and Enterprise (CITE) taking up Information Technology, a 3-year post-secondary technician course. I received my diploma last May 2007.

During my in-plant training through the Dual Training System (DTS). I was deployed at Lexmark Research and Development Corporation as a Laboratory Technician-Trainee from 2 July 2005-2 May 2007.

I believe that the knowledge and skills I learned during my work experience and education provide me the strong foundation in fulfilling the responsibilities which the position may demand.

My strengths include being able to work will with various personalities, communicate with people of different ranks, and adapt to new environments with a creative and resourceful attitude. Being a novice, however, i am also willing to undergo any training to carry out the tasks that the job may require. In addition, I am very detail oriented, persistent, and punctual.

For specific information about me, please refer to the enclosed resume stating my personal records. I shall be pleased to see you for a- personal interview at your most convenient time. You may contact me through these numbers: 238-8083 / cell. no. 09226306759 or 09292189891.

Yours truly,

FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA


Enclosure:Resume

Complaint Letter

Tonix Internet Cafe
Sitio Upper Kalubihan
Labogon, Mandaue City
24 July 2008

Mr. Jose Dimagiba
Manager
Ng Khai Development Corporation
San Jose, Cebu City

Mr. Dimagiba:

I have received the two units of computers which I ordered last July 20 for my internet cafe.

The two units of computers are actually running well. But in two days after the installation, I encountered some malfunctions in the hard drives of the two units. I cannot save any files in the hard drives. At first, I taught the problem is on the files I saved but when I try to save another file, the file was automatically deleted.

I know that your company is known for its high sense of professionalism. I hope you can make a quick response in fixing this problem.

Yours truly,


FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA

Sample Memo 1 (Resignation Letter)

Neverfail Company
San Jose, Cebu City

To: Flintstone Florita
Computer Technician
Subject: Resignation
Date: 8 August 2008
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Sir:

Neverfail company really contributes a lot in my personal development. The company has never failed to give their employees a good salaries and work benefits.

However, I decided to leave my work at Neverfail because I need to pursue my studies as a fulltime student at University of San Jose Carlos (USC). I want to graduate with a bachelor's degree inorder to develop my skills and to learn more about information technology. And because I want to be an I.T. professional someday. I'm willing to give a thirty days allowance for my replacement.

I'm looking forward for your positive response.

Invitation Letter

XYZ High School
Cabancalan, Mandaue City

Mr. Flintstone L. Florita
President
ABC Corporation
San Jose, Cebu City

Mr. Florita:

We are inviting you to be our guest speaker for our annual forum on "Technical-Vocational Education and Training" on Monday, 7 July 2008 at 9-11 a.m. at our campus.

In attendance will be 1000 students who are all agog to learn from you the significance of TVET in nation building. You speech may be 45 minutes long since there will be an open forum afterwards. We shall get in touch with you tomorrow to give you the full details.

we look forward to seeing you here.

Yours truly,


JOSE O. SANTOS

Saturday, September 27, 2008

Order Letter

CITE Technical Institute, Inc.
San Jose, Cebu City

To: Engr. Neil N. Agbay
Department Head
From: Flintstone L. Florita
2E-IT
Subject: Request for Pull-out
Date: 30 July 2008
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Sir:

I've been working in XYZ Comapny for ten months already as an I.T. trainee for my DTS. The company contributed so much for my development in learning clerical skills like writing letters, messengerial works, etc.

However, my work in XYZ company is not actually related to my field in I.T. and I still fall short of the skills that I learned in the company. My supervisor told me that I will be relocated in the Sys-As department in three months but the recent reorganization of XYZ company has delayed the movement. For this reason, I'm requesting for and immediate pull-out in XYZ company, I will try to showcase my I.T. skills in other company and so that, I can developed it more.

I am looking forward to your positive response.

Sample Memo 2 (Reference Letter)

Neverfail Company
San Jose, Cebu City
To: Flintstone Florita
Computer Technician
Subject: Resignation
Date: 8 August 2008
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Sir:

I'm Flintstone Florita, a system administrator at Neverfail company, located in San Jose, Cebu City.

For the last five years, I had been working with Mr. Eduardo Tuico Jr. as his supervisor at Lexmark Research and Development Corporation. As his mentor, I can say to him that he have the professional skills and abilities of an I.T. technical support technician and he shows a high sense of professionalism toward his work and he also possesses a deep values formation.

I highly recommend him to be hired as an I.T. technical support technician in our company. He already a five years experience of working in technical support department and he is physically, mentally, and practically deserving to work at Neverfail.

Monday, September 22, 2008

Adjustment Letter

Ng Khai Development Corporation
San Jose, Cebu City
28 July 2008


Mr. Flintstone L. Florita
Owner
Tonix Internet Cafe
Labogon, Mandaue City


Mr. Florita


I just received your complaint letter at 10:00 am, 26 July 2008. I'm glad that you call immediately our attention about the problem you encounter.


I read from the letter that there is a problem regarding about the hard drives of the two units of computer that you ordered from us. The malfunctioning of the hard drives occurred because you maybe saved files that not suited for the memory of the hard drive. You ordered from us, the unit of computers that only have 50G memory.


If you want to fix the problem immediately, we can replace the two units of computer by another unit with 600G memory of hard drive. You will just add 2,800 pesos for each unit.


Thank you very much for your orders. We are open for any comments and suggestions about the services we offered.


Yours truly,



JOSE DIMAGIBA

Thursday, September 18, 2008

Refusal Letter

ABC Corporation
San Jose, Cebu City
2 July 2008

Mr. Jose O. Santos
XYZ High School
Cabancalan, Mandaue City


Mr. Santos:


I just received your letter of invitation this morning, 2 July 2008.


I'm sorry to tell you that I can't attend as your guest speaker for your annual forum on “Technical-Vocational Education and Training” , because on that particular day and time I am going to attend a meeting with the stockholders of our company and my presence is a must as the president of the company.


Thank you very much for the invitation. It's my pleasure to be invited again as your guest speaker on the next annual forum. I hope that your annual forum will be successfully done and I am hoping for your kind consideration.


Yours truly,



FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA

Inquiry Letter

Sitio Upper Kalubihan
Labogon, Mandaue City
30 July 2008


Mr. Jose Dimagiba
Manager
Ng Khai Development Corporation
San Jose, Cebu City


Mr. Dimagiba


I'm planning to put up my own internet cafe near Center for Industrial, Technology, and Enterpise ( CITE ). I just want to ask for some quotations from your company about the start up cost for this kind of business including computers, routers, etc.


These are some questions I just want to inquire :

  1. Total cost of a 20 units of computer ( Pentium IV ).
  2. Efficient cable wires to use for the network, fiber optics or UTP cable wire?
  3. Appropriate Operating System to be installed, ( Windows Vista or Windows Xp? )
  4. Fast internet service provider, a DSL or Broadband connection?


I will really appreciate your response and I will promise to keep this confidential.


Yours truly,



FLINTSTONE L. FLORITA